Last few days of Editing
Since getting feedback from both Miss Thrasher and Blackborow we have made quite a few changes to our sequence. With the help of Mr Deans, we have managed to brighten a lot of our shots, and we also tried to get rid of the grainy-ness as a result of zooming on the lipstick shots. The grainy-ness has now gone but we still need to adjust the lighting to match other shots. Although we shot Barney's street shots on different days, we have now adjusted the light so that it follows the continuity of the sequence.

We have also made the first cross dissolve that establishes the scene longer.

To make the ending more dramatic, as Miss Blackborow said, we have also adjusted the speed on the shot so that Laura picks up the knife really quickly, and then walks round in slow motion bringing up the knife as this makes it look much more shocking.

We also added the clock ticking sound as a sound bridge which sounds really good!

For the final title 'Love you to Death' we downlaoded a font called inkedgod off dafont.com to make it look more proffesional and unique. We may experiment with the title by adding a whispy effect to make it look more mysterious. We still need to sort out the final shot, and we are considering getting rid of the evil smile shot as it looks slightly amateur after the knife shot.

-by Aarti (for the group)