More Feedback

Today we got some more useful feedback from Miss Blackborow which means that we need to change quite a lot of things in our sequence. She has said to:

- make the first fade-up to house longer
- get rid of the fade-down from house
- make the cross-disslove to shower bigger
- change the font of the credits to make it more curlier
- take the picking up photoframe shot and clock shot out because they are too boring and not subtle enough
- replace these shots by the lipstick popping shot
- move the tying up dress shot to later on in the sequence so it makes more sense
- move the 'based on a novel...by Sandy Winters' down slightly
- the final title distacts th audience from the knife so maybe we could fade to black and then have the title come on.

We now have lunchtime and after school to work on these changes and i think it will really help to improve our sequence. We may even have time for a screening today which will be helpful!

-by Aarti for the group